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Don't know if I really like this. It's like something is off. Feedback would be nice before I submit it to the contest.

Alright made some changes I hope this is better. Feedback?

Thank you to =EmoKels and =SnowSniffer

For the #EmoticonOpus Bubble contest.
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TheIrritatingPenguin Featured By Owner Nov 17, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Good, but I think it could still be a little smoother. The rest is ok, but to me it looks to jumpy. Still like it ;)
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sugarislife28 Featured By Owner Nov 17, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
thanks
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TheIrritatingPenguin Featured By Owner Nov 17, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Welcome!
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Infinite-Carousel Featured By Owner Nov 11, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Much improved! I really like it! :D
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sugarislife28 Featured By Owner Nov 11, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
really? YAY!
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Rbananas Featured By Owner Nov 9, 2012  Student General Artist
Cool idea, but I think you should add some more in-between frames to make it look smoother. Just an idea. :)
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sugarislife28 Featured By Owner Nov 9, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
well I did ^^;
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Rbananas Featured By Owner Nov 9, 2012  Student General Artist
Even more would be better! ;) But that's only my opinion; you don't have to if you don't want to.
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sugarislife28 Featured By Owner Nov 9, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
well I'm not really sure how I would I mean can you be a little more specific. Like does the bubble need to go up more or something?
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Rbananas Featured By Owner Nov 9, 2012  Student General Artist
No, I just meant that you should add more frames of the motion in-between. Right now it seems kind of jerky.
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sugarislife28 Featured By Owner Nov 9, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
oh ok I will take a look
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Operia Featured By Owner Nov 8, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
It looks a lot better! Lovely work on this :D
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sugarislife28 Featured By Owner Nov 8, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
yay!
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haydenm14 Featured By Owner Nov 8, 2012  Hobbyist Filmographer
Cute!
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sugarislife28 Featured By Owner Nov 8, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
thanks!
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haydenm14 Featured By Owner Nov 8, 2012  Hobbyist Filmographer
You're welcome!
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SnowSniffer Featured By Owner Nov 8, 2012
It looks cute! But I think it's a bit too slow. But I really love how you made the bubble! Well done! :happybounce:
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sugarislife28 Featured By Owner Nov 8, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thanks! Hmm I thought it went to fast when I did a different speed.
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SnowSniffer Featured By Owner Nov 8, 2012
well then you should add more frames to it! it would look smoother. :la:
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sugarislife28 Featured By Owner Nov 8, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
how does it look now?
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SnowSniffer Featured By Owner Nov 8, 2012
It looks good! But I think you should still add more frames. Like I said (for it to look smoother). :)
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sugarislife28 Featured By Owner Nov 8, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
hmm ok
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Infinite-Carousel Featured By Owner Nov 7, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
It looks great now, but after reading the critique I can't wait to see the changes! :happybounce:
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sugarislife28 Featured By Owner Nov 7, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
thanks!
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Infinite-Carousel Featured By Owner Nov 7, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
You're welcome!
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Operia Featured By Owner Nov 6, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
You asked for a critique, so here goes :P
Sorry if it seems harsh, I'm in a harsh mood.

The animation is cute, but seems to be too static. What I mean by that is, apart from the bubble moving up and down and Sugar waving her arms around the animation doesn't seem to do much. Maybe changing the width & height of the bubble, for example a shrink & stretch bounce animation when Sugar pushes it up to avoid the needle, would help to make the animation look less motionless.

Also, it's very hard to make out anything about Sugar except the basic shape of her body and arms. You need to make her eyes and mouth, at the very least, be more visible. Otherwise, she just looks like three green dots in a bubble.

The other aspects of this are good. You've added good detail to the objects to make them look realistic-ish, and the overall composition (aside from not being able to see Sugar) is done well
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sugarislife28 Featured By Owner Nov 6, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
nope thank you very much and when I get a chance I will make changes
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Operia Featured By Owner Nov 7, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Okay
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MellenAgen Featured By Owner Nov 6, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
Oh noes DX DONT POP
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sugarislife28 Featured By Owner Nov 6, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
it's getting close
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MellenAgen Featured By Owner Nov 6, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
TOO CLOSE DXX
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sugarislife28 Featured By Owner Nov 6, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
hopefully it won't pop
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